Saturday, July 7, 2007

THE DARKNESS REMAINS

If I touch a burning candle I can feel no pain..
In the ice or in the sun it's all the same,
ive become cold hearted and hollow..
souless and shallow..
yet, Over the dark veil of shadows i watch..
with a sense of hope, i wait and watch..
only to realize..all this is in vain..
nuthin can take away the numbness inflicted by the pain..
dissapointed and distraught..
i lay there senseless and without thought..
in the deepest of dungeons bounded by chains
around me..Darkness is all that remains.!!!!!!!

3 comments:

miss wabbit said...

crazy as ever :)

Inn_dew said...

I came, I read and I percieve :P
Well keep writing ... quite a dramatic start I must say ...:)

حسام هاشم قنديل said...

As writing it is really very nice
But as start you should see the only the bright and always think about it,
Sun at the day time
Moon and stars (lol) at the night time

You should have said bright is remains.

Thanks Adi for giving me a chance to read this wonderful "land of the alters"